Six Sentence Sunday: Call Me Desiree

Welcome to my Sunday Six! This week’s excerpt is from a new erotic short story I wrote for the Red Lipstick Journals, an online/Kindle magazine. I love stories that tease the reader to figure out what’s happening. This story has a twist at the end. Think you can figure it out? You can read the entire story on Monday, October 18 on RLJ.

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Good for the soul that man was.

Right on time he strolled through the door as if he were happy to be there. His positive attitude had caught Desiree’s attention from the start. Okay, truthfully it had taken her a while to notice his attitude because she was distracted by all that muscle and brawn.

Josh was sin personified from the top of his curly-haired head to the bottom of his rubber-soled shoes. His brown eyes twinkled devilishly when he smiled, a toe-curling, pussy-dampening flash of white.

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To bookmark Red Lipstick Journals for the complete Call Me Desiree, click here. If you read the entire story and figure out the ending before the end, drop me a line and tell me!

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32 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday: Call Me Desiree

  1. Graylin Fox says:

    “Sin personified” – Love the description of him and paired with that picture? Whew!

  2. I just love how you write, Cara: straightforward and light, drawing me along all the way. It’s a joy to read.

  3. Sarah Grimm says:

    Mmmm. Sound yummy. I have to read this one!

  4. Marie Dees says:

    Love the muscle and brawn! Good luck with the story.

  5. sue says:

    good six – perhaps he works for Mr. D ? I liked good for the soul – so important

  6. jayel kaye says:

    He sounds absolutely drool worthy

  7. Sandi Sookoo says:

    lol “…all that muscle and brawn…” Nice 6!

  8. Gayle Ramage says:

    ‘Sin personafied’ – I bet he is!

    Have bookmarked for the entire story. Great six!

  9. Jenna McCormick says:

    Yeah baby, getting right to it! Super hot six!

  10. Eleri Stone says:

    Nice description. Great voice.

  11. lexcade says:

    WANT. He sounds foxy as hell (pun intended). Great six!

  12. I’m with Rebecca! Great last line! She definitely has the hots for him, and by the description, I can’t blame her! πŸ™‚

  13. Gem Sivad says:

    *Ahem…I believe your last description summed up my opinion. πŸ™‚ Great six!

  14. Misa says:

    Hmm, he sounds like a guy I lust after – yum!

    Nice six πŸ™‚

  15. Liz says:

    Love that first line and the last…and everything in between!

  16. J.A. Beard says:

    Hehe. Sin personified. That’s all you need to know about him. πŸ™‚

  17. Oh what a tantalyzing six. I love your description.

  18. Lisa Fox says:

    Sin personified – That’s my kind of man!

  19. Lorien Velez says:

    Hot snippet! Love your writing. Could this have something to do with a sexy demon? πŸ™‚

  20. Ella Drake says:

    rawr. that’s one hot smile.

  21. Those devilishly twinkling eyes will do it every time!

  22. His brown eyes twinkled devilishly when he smiled, a toe-curling, pussy-dampening flash of white. -omg I love it!!!

    Great six, Cara!

  23. Stacey Kennedy says:

    I want one!! πŸ˜€

  24. Alanna Coca says:

    I would like to see that smile. Maybe next week you can post a picture….

  25. What a description!? *fanning myself now* πŸ™‚

  26. Wow – yeah, I have to agree about that last sentence. Nice!!

  27. Oh yeah, I wants me some sin personified! And lordy, the accompanying photo offered a nice visual of his hotness. πŸ™‚

  28. Jean Davis says:

    Very hot! Love the pic too.

  29. He definitely sounds yummy.

    ~ Renee

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