Six Sentence Sunday: Secret Desires

Thank you for dropping by. My Six Sentence Sunday excerpt is from my erotic romance ménage, Secret Desires, published by Black Velvet Seductions. The story is about Jack and Morgan, two non-vanilla people who are each convinced the other one only likes vanilla (and I’m not talking ice cream). One of my first SSS excerpts was from Morgan’s POV. Today, I’m sharing a snippet of Jack’s:

He couldn’t even bring himself to talk to her about it, afraid she would reject not only his suggestions, but him, too. He should stop obsessing about what he couldn’t have and be satisfied with PB & J. That’s how he thought of their sex life—it was a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. It took the edge off his appetite, but it didn’t fulfill his real hunger. Like switching from grape to strawberry jam or from smooth to crunchy peanut butter, their sex life varied a little, but it was still basically the same. PB & J wasn’t the kind of sandwich he craved.

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32 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday: Secret Desires

  1. What a great analogy. A steady diet of P&B would get rather boring. *G
    And I can see how this would be something hard to talk about for a couple.
    Great six!

  2. Sandi Sookoo says:

    lol loved how he explains it!

  3. Alix says:

    Great comparison, and great visual substances, I had him looking into the jars just slightly shaking his head. Fantastic six. Thank you.

  4. Sharita Lira says:

    Nice 6. I love the analogy too. Very unique!

  5. Lisa Fox says:

    What a great analogy! Is that PB&J with the crusts cut off or not though?

  6. Bree Younger says:

    I’m thinking he’s wanting some turkey with ham on rye. lol! This really helps readers who aren’t into kink understand the desires of those of “us” who are. *winks*

  7. Eleri Stone says:

    This is a great setup and I love the analogy.

  8. Lindsay K says:

    The peanut butter comparison was awesome.

  9. I loved that analogy. It was so perfect.

  10. Sarah Grimm says:

    Fabulous analogy! Loved it!

  11. That’s just the kind of analogy a guy would use. Perfect!

  12. Marie Dees says:

    Fun six. now I want a PBJ though

  13. Hehe, loved the analogy xx fab six!

  14. Sam Crescent says:

    Loved it, I adore peanut butter 🙂

  15. Skylar Kade says:

    I love this analogy!–thanks for the SSS!

  16. Lindsay says:

    Interesting way to view your sex life. As a PB&J

  17. Jean says:

    Love the analogy, something everyone can relate to. Great six.

  18. Great analogy! I hope they do talk about it though as I think they both are looking for more than PB&J.

  19. Wow, I really loved this analogy. Very realistic, I loved how he explained it you could feel the emotion behind it. Not wanting to hurt her by talking about it but still needing more. I wonder how long he can fend off his own yearning before something goes wrong … great six!

  20. Xakara says:

    Perfect descrip! I feel for him. PB&J is great, but sometimes you need a grilled six-cheese with bacon on sourdough to feel sated and yourself. Just sayin’ *grin*

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS

  21. Sonya Clark says:

    That’s quite an analogy, I like that! Great six.

  22. I’m so glad you explained the PB & J! Great scenario.

  23. He should try a PB & J with Jalapeno jelly. Mmmm-mmm.

  24. Paula Martin says:

    Now then, just what DOES he crave to fulfil his real hunger?
    Great Six, Cara!

  25. Graylin Fox says:

    Sometimes you need more variety in your buffet! Great Six.

  26. Ranae Rose says:

    Hmm, wonder how he’ll spice things up? But at the same time, I couldn’t help being reminded of when I was a kid and went through a period of being absolutely obsessed with PB&J. At the time I was into learning web coding and I think I even made a website dedicated to it. lol

  27. Great analogy! Loved it!

  28. Zee Monodee says:

    Loved your description and how he explains their love life! Very well done. 🙂

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