Six Sentence Sunday: Jack makes good on his promise

To everyone who has been here before:  thank you. I appreciate your support in coming back to read and comment on my snippets. Today’s excerpt is another tidbit from Secret Desires, my m/f/m ménage published by Black Velvet Seductions.  To recap:  Morgan shows up three hours late to her own birthday party to find Jack and his buddies playing poker.

He shuffled the deck, then fanned it out. “Pick one, Morgan.”

She eyed him suspiciously. Cautiously, she extracted a card and handed it to him without looking at it.

He set it face down on the table and tapped it with his finger. “This is the number of spanks you’ll receive for each hour you were late.”

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53 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday: Jack makes good on his promise

  1. Alix says:

    Ouch! I’m so wondering how many that is going to be. A great six Cara. Thank you.

  2. Ahahahaha I so wasn’t expecting that last line. Awesomeness! lol

  3. Sam Crescent says:

    Love it. Wonder which card it was.

  4. Sandi Sookoo says:

    oooh, now that’s a new way to play cards! 🙂

  5. Marie Dees says:

    Hmm, I love that she doesn’t look at the card. That definitely gives control over to him.

  6. Sarah Grimm says:

    Ouch! I wonder which card it will be.

  7. Gem Sivad says:

    That was just fantastic. I can’t wait to read more!

  8. Great six. Though it sounds a little pain is in her future 😉

  9. Stacey Kennedy says:

    WOO HOO! LOL! How playful, sexy, and damn intriguing! Love it!

  10. Oh, yeah! I like that! But who will be giving the spankings??? Great six!

  11. What was the card??? And is it Ace high or low?? You know she should have set the rules before just blindly picking – lol! Excellent snippet.

  12. Ohhh, I wasn’t expecting that. Nice card game hehe LOVE IT!

  13. Ranae Rose says:

    lol, I wasn’t expecting that. Love it!

  14. Luxie Ryder says:

    Ack! Which card was it?? Fabulous tease!

  15. MJones says:

    OOOH SIZZLE. I wonder what the number is! 😀

  16. Sharita Lira says:

    Sexy six! 🙂 Love it!

  17. Oh my… wonder which card she picked? 🙂 🙂 🙂

  18. Bree Younger says:

    Wonder if he stacked the deck? Hmmmm….Shivery snip!!

  19. T. Harrison says:

    Yowwch! That’ll teach her! Great six! 🙂

  20. Sondra Carr says:

    Not only how many but who? What a teaser!

  21. Tigris Eden says:

    *fans self* Goodness! Great Six!

  22. Eleri Stone says:

    Had to go buy this last week. Loved it. Great story.

  23. Monica Enderle Pierce says:

    LOL! Now *that’s* a card trick. 😉

  24. Lindsay says:

    Wonder what the ‘Ace’ or ‘King’ are worth.

  25. Liz Crowe says:

    woo hoo! sounds like fun! great, naughty six.
    liz

  26. Hmm… Maybe she as late on purpose! Nicely naughty 6.

  27. Karysa Faire says:

    With the poker guys watching?

  28. Dee Carney says:

    Hot damn! LOL. Can’t wait to read what happens next!

  29. Gayle Ramage says:

    Well, 3 spanks isn’t too much, is it? Great six.

  30. Ooooo!~!!! sexy!!!!!! I love it *G*!

    xx
    A.

  31. Sonya Clark says:

    I’m betting he cheated to make sure she drew a high card. 😉

  32. Hot six! I so want to know how this birthday paddling got along! 😉

  33. Michele says:

    Oooooh, naughty! I love it!

  34. Great six! And I love your site. Very sexy 🙂

  35. Xakara says:

    Oooo, so a low card or a high card, what to hope for? *grin*

    ~Xakara
    Dawn’s Early Light 6SS

  36. Lorien Velez says:

    Love it!! Jack of all trades. Great job on the concept between poker and number of spanks. 😉

  37. Liana Brooks says:

    I’m guessing she has an interest in this kind of thing, if not, he’s in a world of hurt for suggesting it.

  38. What happens if she draws the queen? Does she get to spank him? Seems only fair!

  39. The idea of such a tense moment taking such a sexual turn is so suspenseful. I had to read the excerpt and now I have to buy Secret Desires.

  40. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Sounds like a different kind of party game! Great tease for next week. Fun six.

  41. Lani Rhea says:

    Whoa! Nice! Makes me wonder how many swats she’ll receive. heehee Great six!

  42. Zee Monodee says:

    Oh my! Love the calm with which he delivered this promise. Brilliant!

  43. Pepper Anthony says:

    Holy smokin’ six. This definitely makes me want to read more!

  44. What a fab ending line, well done! 🙂

  45. What about the face cards? Hee. I love the sort of low-key remonstrance here. Makes me all tingly thinkin she’s gonna get it…

  46. Not what I was expecting–made me laugh. Great job!

  47. Moira Reid says:

    Love this!!! Great six! Very visual!

  48. Bonni Sansom says:

    Very hot six. Can’t wait to read the rest.

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