Breeder: Alpha lets down his guard…#SatSpanks, #WewriWa…

CB_Breeder_coverlgBut when she swayed toward him, he stepped out of reach, and fire froze to ice. “You may retire to your chamber.” He turned away.

His rejection slapped her harder than Corren’s blow. The pressure of tears swelled in her face, and she prayed she could suppress them until she reached the privacy of her room. She rushed to the door.

“But I hope you will remain.” Like pottery shattering on stone, he sounded rough and broken.


Those are eight sentences excerpted from Breeder, an erotic science fiction romance. Breeder is still in the top 10 on Amazon in books/romance/science fiction, books/romance/fantasy and Kindle/romance/science fiction.

Thank you for participating and visiting Saturday Spankings and Weekend Writing Warriors. You may click on the highlighted links to check out the other authors on the tour. If you care to read the start of chapter 1 of Breeder, it is here:

Chapter One

If not for the sneeze, Dak would have exited the musty, dank corridor. But the muffled sound caught his attention. When he squinted into the darkened cell, he spotted a female crouched on a straw mat in the corner. He hadn’t noticed her on his way into the Breeder Containment Facility; the habitation unit had appeared empty.

Dak turned to the BCF director and sighed. “What about her?”

The beta’s already crooked mouth drooped farther in distaste. “My apologies, Commander. You don’t want that one.”

Sival’s disparagement piqued Dak’s interest. The director’s opinion had proven worthless; none of the breeders he’d preselected for inspection had rated close to satisfactory.

“I would like to see her,” Dak insisted.

“Very well, Commander.” Sival saluted and opened the habitation cell with a master entry card. Dak stepped into the small enclosure. The director followed, and the metal gate clanked shut.

The naked female drew into a tighter ball and tucked her face deeper into the crook of her arm. Other breeders had preened as soon as they’d noticed him and his chest-insignia identification. He wasn’t just an alpha. He was the Alpha.

This breeder’s lack of respect and failure to adhere to Protocol by acknowledging his presence struck him as odd. Dak frowned. “Is she mentally deficient?”

Sival tightened his lips. “No, stubborn, ill behaved. She would not befit an Alpha Commander.” He nudged the female’s hip with the toe of his boot. “Rise to your feet.” She did not respond, and he moved to prod her again. Dak forestalled him with a wave and grasped the female’s arm.

“You will stand.” He hauled her upright. She averted her face, so he grabbed her chin and forced her to look at him. Tangled hair the color of black heating stones fell back from an oval face to reveal eyes like the Parseon moon. The glimmer of intelligence that sparked within the violet depths aroused his interest more than anything else he’d seen so far. Nature had bestowed the Parseon people with an exceptionally strong immune system so that they rarely required medical intervention, but breeders by nature were weak, and so many of the ones he’d seen had seemed dull or ill or both. This one’s skin, when unsmudged by grime and dirt, probably glowed like the pale sands of the Ospian Sea. He supposed, as breeders went, she wasn’t unattractive, although the stench emanating from her was. His beta would throw a fit if he dragged such a creature into their domicile.

“Why is she so filthy?” he asked.

“She refuses to bathe.”

As Dak scrutinized her facial features for shape and symmetry, he noted little imperfection or dysgenics other than her lack of hygiene and her gender. When cleaned up, she would please the eye, but to bear his sons, it mattered more that she be healthy and strong.

He released her face, stepped back, and assessed her from head to toe. He exceeded the height of most males, alphas included, while she stood smaller than the average female. The top of her head failed to even meet his shoulder. She was thinner than other breeders too, although her chest bore an abundance of fatty breast tissue. In the chill of the cell, her nipples had puckered to hard points. Despite the coolness, he was experiencing a rise in temperature. A dormant lust chose that moment to kindle, causing heat to coil in his abdomen and groin. He could not remember the last time he’d experienced such a spontaneous reaction—if he ever had. With the pads of his fingers, he probed the sides of her neck for swollen areas. The way she trembled under his touch aroused a sliver of sympathy. Breeders lacked courage, and uncertainty frightened them. Not all alphas and their betas treated breeders well. If he chose her, she would be adequately fed and housed. His command consumed his time and energy, which left his beta alone for long stretches. A breeder would relieve Corren of household chores and provide him with a physical outlet as well.

“What is she called?” Dak asked.

“Her sire named her Omra.”

Peace, it meant.

He parted Omra’s lips with his fingers and slipped a digit into her mouth, running it along her upper gum line to check the solidness of her teeth. At a flash in her eyes, he jerked his hand away a centisecond before she snapped her jaws together, so that her incisor only grazed the tip of his finger.

Sival’s face reddened. “Commander, I apologize. I will have her flogged.”

“Unnecessary. I will take care of it.” He unclipped the sudon from his belt.

Breeder Blurb

BestsellerIcon100X100To secure his legacy, Commander Dak, a ruling Alpha of planet Parseon, purchases Omra, a breeder slave. He intends to impregnate her, produce a son, and hand her off to his anointed beta partner. As Dak and Omra discover a sexual bliss banned by law, he begins to question Protocol-sanctioned male domination, causing him to jeopardize his command and endanger the life of the woman he has come to love.

Breeder explores the concepts of gender roles and social prohibitions against deviant behavior. It includes graphic M/F and some M/M sexual content and domestic discipline.

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29 Responses to Breeder: Alpha lets down his guard…#SatSpanks, #WewriWa…

  1. Tara Finnegan says:

    I love the roller coaster of emotions in so few lines. Beautifully done.

  2. PK Corey says:

    I agree with Tara, only a good writer can say so much with just a few sentences.

  3. Sue Lyndon says:

    Such a pivotal scene in the book. Love it.

  4. Alice Dark says:

    I love the last line in the snippet. Comparing someone’s voice to shattering pottery is lovely. The audible in that line is perfect.

  5. Leigh Smith (aka Sunny Girl) says:

    Great writing. It’s no wonder this one had climbed up in the charts so quickly. A must read.

  6. Excellent. You reveal so much emotion within both of them with so few words.

  7. Renee Rose says:

    Oh, excellent save at the end. What a great scene!

  8. I thought the use of the word ‘pray’ was interesting. Do they have religion on Parseon?

  9. Sher says:

    Oh, the emotion in these eight sentences! I feel whipsawed by them! But you meant to do that, right? Must read this book.

  10. Loved the surrender I could hear in his voice! Great 8.

  11. S. J. Maylee says:

    Such powerful emotion. You took me right back there with this little snippet. It’s such a great read. I can’t wait for Breeder #2. 🙂

  12. aww that was such a beautiful scene. Thanks for sharing, Cara 🙂

  13. Lauren Smith says:

    another great snippet! I’m so excited to read this! It’s next up on my kindle!

  14. Gemma Parkes says:

    I love his change of direction and the emotive tension you created in between.

  15. This was such an excellent book and I remember this scene, SO effective the way he shows what he really wants at the end. Excellent excerpt!

  16. Siobhan Muir says:

    So he’s not as unaffected by her as he’d like to be. Good snippet, Cara. 🙂

  17. sue says:

    love the last line

  18. Great tension and emotion between them. Lovely writing, Cara!

  19. Millie Burns says:

    That last line is a heartbreaker.

  20. Sarah Cass says:

    Wow, what a roller coaster of emotions. Well done in the short span of 8 sentences!

  21. I’m going to read it this week. I can’t wait!!!

  22. Caitlin says:

    They’re both experiencing some extreme emotional mood swings. He’s going to have to learn to communicate a little better–but that last line was a start.

  23. PalomaBeck says:

    This scene when he reaches out to her like this made me smile.

  24. As soon as my new kindle arrives I am reading this one. I love an emotional roller coaster and I think this is what you have hear. Is it 11/6 yet (delivery date)

  25. Suzy says:

    Love it and chapter 1 😉

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