#8Sunday: Marlix gets a lesson in female anatomy…

Here it is time for  #8Sunday/Weekend Writing Warriors and another eight sentences from Breeder 2: Terran — now under contract with Loose Id! 

This week I played fast and loose with the punctuation to squeeze 10 sentences into eight:

Tara Diehl, the heroine of Breeder 2: Terran

Tara Diehl, the heroine of Breeder 2: Terran

He inspected the vendoress’s chest again. Given the breast-baring construction of the beige shifts breeders wore, female mammary glands held few secrets. But the fact that this vendoress had hidden hers aroused his curiosity — did she have round breasts or conical ones? Long, thick nipples or small ones?

“Hey, buddy — my eyes are up here!” She snapped her fingers in front of her face.

Marlix frowned in confusion. “I am aware of the location of your eyes.”

Unofficial Terran blurb:

Commander Marlix of Parseon Province Four

Commander Marlix of Parseon Province Four

As vigilante killings in protest of the heterodox Enclave and its deviant male-female couplings increase across Parseon, Commander Marlix seeks protective uniforms for his inner guard. The special composite fabric is only available from the Terrans, with whom his planet has an alliance. He expects to be repulsed by the vendoress of an alien race he loathes, but instead he is amused and attracted by the female’s bold appearance and brash behavior. When she is injured in an attack, he whisks her away to his underground bunker abode to recover. His intent is to help her, so he can’t understand. Why does she fight him so?

After fleeing loneliness and heartache on Terra, Tara Diehl has adjusted to male-dominated Parseon better than most vendors until she is kidnapped by an Alpha, one of the five rulers of the planet. At first she’s terrified of her tall, muscled abductor, especially when he doesn’t hesitate to quell her struggles with some force of his own. After all her methods and ploys to escape fail, she decides to seduce her way to freedom.

But out of  seduction and subterfuge grow a true intimacy that cause both Marlix and Tara to take action that drives Parseon to the brink of civil war, and threatens their relationship and her life.

Terran, the second book in the Breeder sci-fi series, is a “capture” romance involving a domineering but hunky alien, a female with a bad dye job and an even worse attitude, graphic sex, and spanking.

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11 Responses to #8Sunday: Marlix gets a lesson in female anatomy…

  1. Millie Burns says:

    Cara, this is so hysterical. I can totally see this playing out in my head. That guy is in need of a lesson ; )

  2. LOL

    I’ve witnessed (and, ahem, *perhaps* participated) in this scene being played out in real life many a time… ;D

    Great stuff, hilariously written — nice work!

  3. HaHa! I’ve said that a few times myself. Though I’ve never had that response. LOL Great snippet.

  4. Gemma Parkes says:

    I like the fact that his interest is piqued because she is modest, so true! This girl really has a lot of spirit!

  5. Eleri Stone says:

    Lovin’ the dynamic between them!

  6. Gem Sivad says:

    Love her “Hey, buddy — my eyes are up here!” Great exchange.

  7. Sarah Cass says:

    Oh, I do love a strong female with attitude!! I can’t wait to see how these two play off each other!

  8. Evelyn Jules says:

    Hee! Such a fun excerpt. Love the interaction here. Looking very forward to my next hit of this story! 🙂

  9. Alexis Duran says:

    His response is perfect. I love the interaction between these two so far.

  10. Loved the snippet, some things don’t change no matter what planet you’re on. and YAY for having the book under contract. Terrific news!

  11. Oh boy, can I relate to her. I love that she’s not impressed with him. 😀

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